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(click to skip ahead)In addition to its academic reputation, the University of San Diego has some other fun reasons you might want to apply—like it’s considered the top surfing school in the country, or Geisel Library is home to the world’s largest collection of original Dr. Seuss manuscripts and materials.
Or maybe you’re excited by USD’s contemporary Catholic values or its liberal arts tradition.
Below, we’ll talk you through how to write the University of San Diego personal statement and supplemental essays, with examples and tips + analysis for how to write yours.
If you want to get a clearer sense of all that the University of San Diego is looking for, you can explore an extensive, by-the-numbers look at its offerings, from enrollment and tuition statistics to student life and financial aid information, on its Common Data Set. And for insights into how the University of San Diego envisions itself and its role, and how it wants to grow and evolve, read its strategic plan. Reading through these will give you a strong idea of what USD values.
What are the University of San Diego Supplemental Essay Prompts?
Prompt #1
For over 75 years, the liberal arts have been the cornerstone of the educational experience at USD. They help students explore the world, past and present, and lay the foundation for building inspired and meaningful lives. They also provide the skills and experiences students need to be successful in an increasingly changing and challenging world. Throughout the first year and beyond, we engage students in this exploration through our Core Curriculum and Learning Communities, connecting them with faculty who will guide them as they become global citizens. What excites you about the academic opportunities at USD? You can learn more about our Core Curriculum and Learning Community programs by clicking on the respective links. (350 words max)
Prompt #2
Choose one of the three prompts below to write about. (350 words max)
- Option #1) Here at USD, we value the fact that our students come from all walks of life, have experienced different realities and bring with them an array of unique perspectives, including some that have often been underrepresented and underserved by higher education. Our Horizon Project is a call to action, ensuring that we are dedicating the time, energy and resources necessary to build an ever more diverse, inclusive and equitable campus community. What contribution have you made to your current school and/or local community that best exemplifies your awareness of and commitment to these ideals?
- Option #2) As a proud Changemaker Campus, the USD experience emphasizes changemaking through care for our common home, social justice efforts, civic engagement, social innovation, creativity and a global perspective. Write about one of the challenges facing humanity today. Why does it matter to you? What experiences or insights have you had that speak to the urgency of this issue?
- Option #3) Share some of your ideas about the role of faith or spirituality in your life or the life of someone you know. As a contemporary Catholic university, we welcome and celebrate students from every background and faith tradition, including those who do not identify with a faith tradition. We devote great time and energy to ensuring all students feel connected to the vibrant USD community, including opportunities to grow in their relationship with God while considering who they are, what they believe and who they are called to become.
How to Write Each Supplemental Essay Prompt for Chapman University
How to Write Chapman University Supplemental Essay Prompt #1
Prompt #1
- For over 75 years, the liberal arts have been the cornerstone of the educational experience at USD. They help students explore the world, past and present, and lay the foundation for building inspired and meaningful lives. They also provide the skills and experiences students need to be successful in an increasingly changing and challenging world. Throughout the first year and beyond, we engage students in this exploration through our Core Curriculum and Learning Communities, connecting them with faculty who will guide them as they become global citizens. What excites you about the academic opportunities at USD? You can learn more about our Core Curriculum and Learning Community programs by clicking on the respective links. (350 words max).
This prompt is a standard “Why us?” essay, and 350 words gives you some solid real estate to illustrate via detail why you and USD belong together (which is your goal with this kind of prompt).
We recommend checking out our complete guide on how to write the “Why us?” essay and paying close attention to the “Why Cornell” and “Why Penn” examples, which are our favorites. The “Why Tufts” essay is a nice example of how you can write a shorter version of the “Why us?”
Here’s the abbreviated version of how to write the “Why us?” essay:
Spend 1 hour (at least) researching 5-7 reasons why USD might be a great fit for you (ideally, 3-5 of the reasons will be unique to the school and connect back to you).
Per the last part of the prompt, make sure you’re focusing on opportunities you can only (or mostly only) find at USD (and not, say, the city/area in general).
Make a copy of this Why Us Research Chart to map out your college research (see it below as well).
Create an outline for your essay based on either Approach 1, 2 (recommended), or 3 in the full guide above.
Write a first draft!
Five Common Mistakes Students Make on “Why Us?” Essays
As you go through our tips above to write your essay, there are six things to keep in mind that you shouldn’t include in a “Why us” essay:
Mistake #1: Writing about the school's size, location, reputation, weather, or ranking
Mistake #2: Simply using emotional language to demonstrate fit
Mistake #3: Screwing up the mascot, stadium, team colors or names of any important people or places on campus
Mistake #4: Parroting the brochures or website language
Mistake #5: Describing traditions the school is well known for
Mistake #6: Thinking of this as only a "why them" essay (as mentioned above)
Here’s an example written for Georgia Tech’s version of this prompt, to illustrate the approach you’ll want to take with school-specific details + how they connect to you/your interests/your values.
Example:
At Georgia Tech I'm excited to explore both the small and the large.
I want to work with professor Fedorov at Georgia Tech and study engineering on the nanoscale. I’ve been working on finding potential materials for solar cells by comparing and improving their bandgaps and am interested in participating in the research on the micro-capillary injector. The vibration-powered robots, investigated by Azadeh Ansari and Jun Ueda as well as graduate students DeaGyu Kim and Chris Hao, also attract my interest, for it may be possible for it to swim in the human body, combating diseases.
Science also can be seen in the largest things. Through NASA’s Exobiology Program and working with scientists in Tech’s School of Chemistry and Biochemistry, I’ll learn more about the hydrate crystallization process under high-pressure, and further explore the structures of methane clathrates, understanding the habitability on the icy moons of Jupiter and Saturn. Moreover, the course Nuclear Astrophysics and Stellar Evolution with Dr. Sowell will give me a deeper understanding on the topic of stellar structure and evolution, as well as nucleosynthesis and degenerate objects. Studying this course that also focuses on the Boltzmann & Saha Equations will take my understanding of the relationship between ionization of an atom and its ground and excited state to another level.
Besides science, Tech offers opportunities for me to make connections with those around me. With my experience and interest in video recording and editing, I would love to explore the Filmmakers to work with peers and produce shorts to share with the community. Also, having volunteered for my school’s GiveBack 5K and learning about people’s acts of kindness, I’d love to be a part of the Break Free from Poverty 5K Run/Walk, as sometimes small things can make a big difference.
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Tips + Analysis
Connect the school’s specifics to you. This student does this in a few effective ways:
As a framing device. This student begins with a statement of her interests: exploring things both small and large. By opening this way, we know that every specific example she gives about resources and opportunities at Tech will relate to her interest in exploration. It’s also a useful hook—What kinds of things?
In relation to work she has already done. Right after name-dropping professor Fedorov, she links it to details on her work to find “potential materials for solar cells.” She follows that up with details on the type of research done by Fodorov, research she implies is connected to her own projects. She’s helping us see why these things matter to her, and how she and the college fit together.
As a way to learn more about topics she’s just starting to learn about. The student has an “understanding of the relationship between ionization of an atom and its ground and excited state,” but wants to take that understanding to another level. This implies that she a) already knows something about the topic (seriously, you have to know something to reference Boltzmann Equations…), and b) already has a plan for developing that knowledge at Tech. They’re going to make great partners.
As an opportunity for her to tap into new and budding interests. Just because you haven’t done something amazing in a certain area doesn’t mean you can’t include it in a “Why us?” essay. This student mentions her interest in video recording and editing, and implies that she can have a greater impact on Tech’s campus (producing shorts to share with the community). She also mentions the volunteer work she’s done and the type of volunteer work she hopes to do as a student at Tech.
2. Geek out a little. Nanoscale. Bandgaps. Microcapillary. Hydrate crystallization. Methane clathrates. Without having to explain any of these concepts explicitly, this student shows us that she knows her stuff and will show up on campus ready to jump right into her academic and research work.
3. Show more than one side of yourself. The first two paragraphs make it clear that this student is a science stan. But this student also makes a point of rounding out her interests. While some people may envision a serious scientist living in the lab, she’s the kind of scientist who prioritizes making “connections with those around [her].” By mentioning her video-editing and volunteer work, the reader’s vision of her as a Tech student shifts to more accurately capture the full range of her interests and abilities.
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How to Write University of San Diego Supplemental Essay Prompt #2
Option #1
- Here at USD, we value the fact that our students come from all walks of life, have experienced different realities and bring with them an array of unique perspectives, including some that have often been underrepresented and underserved by higher education. Our Horizon Project is a call to action, ensuring that we are dedicating the time, energy and resources necessary to build an ever more diverse, inclusive and equitable campus community. What contribution have you made to your current school and/or local community that best exemplifies your awareness of and commitment to these ideals?
Option #2
- As a proud Changemaker Campus, the USD experience emphasizes changemaking through care for our common home, social justice efforts, civic engagement, social innovation, creativity and a global perspective. Write about one of the challenges facing humanity today. Why does it matter to you? What experiences or insights have you had that speak to the urgency of this issue?
Option #3
- Share some of your ideas about the role of faith or spirituality in your life or the life of someone you know. As a contemporary Catholic university, we welcome and celebrate students from every background and faith tradition, including those who do not identify with a faith tradition. We devote great time and energy to ensuring all students feel connected to the vibrant USD community, including opportunities to grow in their relationship with God while considering who they are, what they believe and who they are called to become.
To decide which prompt you want to respond to, think about what sides of you / your contributions and impact that USD is seeing in other parts of your application, in particular your personal statement and the “Why Us” above—is there something important they’re either
Not seeing at all? Or
Seeing a little bit, say in an entry in your activities list, but aren’t getting the full scope or importance of?
To think through/brainstorm options you might have for topics here:
Option 1 is a form of “diversity” essay. (And is largely a spin on a typical “how will you contribute” prompt.)
Option 2 you can approach as either a “service/engagement” prompt, or as an “intellectual/issue” prompt.
Option 3 is another form of “diversity” essay, focusing specifically on your relationship to faith or spirituality.
(For a complete guide to different kinds of “diversity” prompts, head here.)
Here’s how you can approach each of those prompts.
For option 1:
You can think of this as a somewhat flipped “how will you contribute” prompt—you’ll still end up illustrating ways you’ll contribute to the diversity of the campus community, but here, you’ll do so by mostly discussing ways you’ve already contributed to your school or community in ways that “build an ever more diverse, inclusive and equitable campus community”.
That quote is the key part of the prompt to build/brainstorm from.
Keep in mind that you don’t have to focus on something like race or ethnicity here, although those are of course possible things to write about.
What are different ways you’ve engaged with people “from all walks of life, [who] have experienced different realities and bring with them an array of unique perspectives”?
What are ways you’ve worked to create greater inclusivity or belonging?
While it’s not required with the prompt’s phrasing, you can potentially end the essay with a couple really specific ways you want to continue engaging at USD (e.g. a club or organization or three that focus on things related to what you wrote about in the body of your essay).
For option 2:
If you want to approach this as a “service/engagement” prompt:
Two questions to ask yourself as you brainstorm topics:
What sort of service and civic engagement projects have you been involved with? Your Activities List is a good place to start.
Are there any essays you’re already writing for another school that you could double with this prompt? If so, it may be a candidate for a Super Essay.
To start brainstorming potential topics, think about meaningful examples and anecdotes that bring the values of service and civic engagement to life—like the club you started to teach STEM to fifth-graders to try to bridge educational gaps, or the recycling project you led in your neighborhood, or the comedy skits you put on for the local senior center to help address social isolation.
The key here: Your topic of choice should be something you genuinely care about, and something you’ve already acted upon in some way. (You can in theory write an essay that focuses entirely on an issue you hope to address someday but haven’t actually done anything about yet, but that seems really hard to pull off well.). You’ll find it much easier to write with enthusiasm if you talk about something you actually find important and interesting.
With this approach, once you’ve picked a topic, you’ll notice you’re (probably) writing an extracurricular activity essay. Here’s a complete guide on how to write that. You’ll want to make sure your values are super clear by the end of the essay.
If you want to treat it as more of an “intellectual/issue” prompt:
By asking about an issue/challenge that matters to you, USD wants to learn in what ways you’re the kind of critical, insightful thinker they want on campus, leading the drive for future change. They also know that being able to formulate and ask critical questions is as (if not more) important than having the answers. After all, what’s college for if not to widen your thinking and give you the resources and confidence to help you solve the unsolvable? So don’t feel as though you have to have all the answers—raising interesting, complex questions that USD can help you explore can be just as (or more) useful.
And note that while your issue doesn’t necessarily have to relate to your major or future career path, that can make it easier.
And while you don’t have to, since you’ve got 350 words of “why us” for prompt 1, you could specify ways that USD can help prepare you to help address this issue (citing specific programs, professors, etc).
So, say your burning issue relates to how to create and implement sustainable health systems for under-resourced communities—your response might include
Why this issue is so important/meaningful/complex
Specific ways you’ve already engaged with it
Maybe: how getting involved with specific aspects/resources at USD will offer nuanced instruction on the socioeconomic determinants of health and wellness
For option 3:
Again, you can approach this in part as a form of “diversity” essay, focusing specifically on your relationship to faith or spirituality (note that you definitely do not need to be Christian to apply, or write this essay), and both ways you’ll connect with other students through/around faith, and ways you want to continue exploring what you believe and how your beliefs shape the life you want to pursue.
Before you start writing, ask yourself these questions:
What are the most important values my spirituality/faith/religion instills in me?
How do I apply those values to my everyday life? How has my spirituality/faith/religion shaped what I do or how I interact with other people?
How do I want to continue growing, and how do my beliefs frame/support that growth?
(Maybe) How do I see these values align or intersect with the mission and/or resources at USD?
By answering these questions with specific details, stories, or insights, you’ll start to see how seemingly disparate parts of your identity and lifestyle might be connected to your faith.
It may help to think of writing this essay like building a house, with spirituality/faith/religion as its foundation. You may build off that foundation by talking about your academic goals, extracurricular interests, career aspirations, or aspects of community you’ve engaged with, but try to connect those in some way back to spirituality/faith/religion and the values or tenets therefrom.
Here are some example essays to illustrate how you can approach some of these prompt options:
This first example was written for Colgate’s “contribute” prompt, but could also fit nicely here (with word count space to expand)
Example:
Aside from my inherent love for bagels, my Jewish background has led me to become more embedded in my community, joining Jewish activists and building a website on Holocaust education.
In the 1930s, 36 members of my family were lost to the Holocaust, and that fact has led me to carry on the memory of my ancestors through tradition—with my Bar Mitzvah—as well as with an educational lens—teaching others about the Holocaust and about specific stories of survivors.
Feeling disconnected from Jewish activism, I decided to become an educator on the Student Leadership Board of the Seattle-based Holocaust Center for Humanity last year. Each week, we met to discuss present-day instances of oppression and discrimination across the world, and finished the year by building a website to share the story of a Holocaust survivor.
Being on the board connected me to a network of other passionate Jewish activists, and helped me to channel the pride for my culture and ancestors into visual media that reaches many viewers. At Colgate, I hope to find myself surrounded not only by like-minded Jewish students, but by a diverse group of people with whom I can learn and make connections. (196 words)
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Tips & Analysis
Highlight a core identity. In the example essay, the applicant highlights their Jewish heritage and the profound impact it has had on their life choices and commitments. This is a great way to approach this prompt—think of communities/identities that you claim, pick one that Vanderbilt isn’t seeing elsewhere, and show how that aspect of you + your experiences will allow you to contribute to the Vanderbilt community. Similarly, for the Vanderbilt prompt, ensure you shed light on the aspects of your background that have shaped your identity. This could be cultural, familial, or personal attributes that have molded you into the individual you are today.
Provide concrete examples of impact. Just as the sample essay vividly narrates the applicant's journey in Jewish activism, so you’ll want to offer specific instances that exemplify the impact your background has had on your decisions and pursuits. Whether through personal experiences, engagements, or projects, share specific moments where your background has led you to initiate meaningful actions. In short, show us.
Connect to the college's community. The sample essay could be stronger if the writer reflected even more on how they might continue to nurture their identity at Vanderbilt. How can you do that? Address how your background, values, and commitments align with Vanderbilt's vision and how you intend to extend these connections on campus to foster learning and shared growth. For example, perhaps you plan on joining (or creating?) relevant student clubs, volunteering at a local museum, or finding innovative ways to connect with students who share a similar background.
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And here’s an example written for Princeton that could be doubled here
Example:
What would you think of me if I told you I lift weights, play basketball, and can grow a full beard? Stereotypically masculine, right? What if, instead, I said I listen to Taylor Swift, sleep in bunk beds, and am a sucker for Hollywood romance… A little less clear. In a country where masculinity feels as standardized as a McDonald’s Happy Meal, I’ve often hid this latter side of myself, fearing it deviates further from the “man” I’m supposed to be than I’d like to admit.
A discussion in my English class about JD Sallanger’s Catcher in the Rye helped ease my insecurity about this sentiment. Sallanger’s work details Holden Caufield’s (the protagonist) teenage insecurities, specifically in regard to his masculinity. We deconstructed hypermasculinity through Caulfield’s actions, whereby he habitually labels people “phony” whom he deems ingenuine because of the facades they construct to avoid vulnerability. Contradicting this belief, Caulfield hypocritically constructs a facade himself in nearly every social interaction he has throughout the novel.
Being a single-sex class, we focused on this projective behavior and how we often deflect our overt shortcomings by resorting, like Caulfield, to disparaging or humorous comments. We then shared personal situations where we felt insecure. To a group of sophomore boys, all insecure in their own masculinity, this admittedly began as a joke, but as we went around the room the tone changed. The laughs and whispers were replaced with respectful silence and considerate nods of agreement. Students shared stories about sports teams, relationships, and their body image—topics that while seemingly trivial to an outsider were exactly the types of experiences we all empathized with and understood.
Ultimately, this conversation was meaningful to me as it validated my own feelings. Others also experienced difficulties conforming to society’s inaccurate and unattainable standards of masculinity. Since this class discussion, I’ve tried to actively oppose this harmful societal standard by pausing in situations where my instinct is to deflect. Rather, I’ve begun to acknowledge my feelings because, as Sallanger demonstrates, those who call others “phony” are the biggest phonies of all.
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And here’s an essay (also written for a Princeton prompt) that could work nicely for USD’s option 2.
Example:
The issue of educational injustice is deeply important to me. School closures during the pandemic exacerbated this inequality, with many public institutions staying closed the 2020-21 school year as opposed to their private school counterparts—their students’ educational experience being less optimal as a result. According to the California Department of Education, students of color account for 75% of public-school enrollment, making them the primary victims. Understanding this disparity and driven by the values of service instilled through my Sacred Heart education, I decided to start TutorDigital, a non-profit free tutoring and technology donation service for Bay Area students.
My interest in tutoring began in middle school through volunteering as a peer tutor. In high school, I created a tutoring club, giving my peers the opportunity to help younger elementary students on financial aid with their homework. With the club being sidetracked by COVID-19, I joined 826 Valencia, an organization dedicated to supporting under-resourced students. This experience prompted me to transition my old club to a remote format, adapting to restrictions imposed by the pandemic. I worked with my friend to rebrand the club, naming it TutorDigital, registering it as a non-profit, designing a website, and recruiting additional tutors. These efforts helped expand our reach to include local public schools. Through our efforts, we’ve helped provide tutoring services to 34 students, while also identifying other opportunities to support public schools, such as donating upwards of 60 iPads and creating a book donation program.
While educational injustice is an issue that unfortunately won’t be solved overnight, it’s an issue that must be aggressively addressed, now more than ever given the massive impacts from the pandemic. I look forward to continuing my work at Princeton through a program such as the Pace Center’s Princeton Online Tutoring Network which closely resembles TutorDigital’s mission. But for now, I gain great satisfaction from each thank you note from a parent or good grade achieved by a student, knowing my efforts have potentially improved the academic trajectory of these children and helped to address educational injustice in my community.
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Andrew Simpson, CEG’s Editorial Director, has worked as an educator, consultant, and curriculum writer for the past 20 years, and earned degrees from Stanford in Political Science and Drama. He feels most at home on mountain tops and in oceans.
Top Values: Insight/Growth | Truth | Integrity
